OK, you've convinced me. Give me a day or two to think about what changes we need to make to the affected pages, then I'll mark them up. If you don't see any activity on this by mid-week, remind me.
Sorry, I've been busy. I'll get to it this weekend. Thanks for reminding me.
I've done some edits, which I hope will make the pages clearer. If you see any problems let me know, but I think you can translate now.