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|Is the second paragraph redundant?||2||16:39, 22 December 2010|
The second paragraph (labeled T:101) was weird, and after Yurchors fix is still largely redundant. My guess is, that is is a fragment of the old text that was unintentionally left in. Should it be removed?
If not, I would suggest a rewrite of the first two section to avoid to much repetition.